Sunday, March 22, 2009

They Say, I Say Chapter 4 Exercise 1 (Morasa S.)

In the passage by Jean Anyon, it seems as though the author has a combination of both agreeing and disagreeing with the summaries she presents on the issue that public schools in complex industrial societies make available different types of educational experience and curriculum knowledge to students in different social classes at the beginning of the passge. The combination of having both an agreeing and disagreeing stand on the issue was seen when Jean stated that little or no attempt was made in investigating elementary and secondary schools to see if proclaimed acclimations were true or false. Nevertheless, the author seemed to have taken an indirect stand on agreeing that education in public schools seem to be divided based on social classes by presenting an article that supported such an argument. Even though evidence was provided for both sides of the argument, the second piece of supporting evidence was more effective because of the fact that it was placed at the end of the passage. This would leave a lasting effect on the reader because it seems to be more of a closing statement for the overall passage. 

Composition @ VT Exercise 7J (Morasa S.)

(a) (a) This paper resembles the writing you would find in a magazine article. This is apparent in terms of the paper’s layout and design in several ways. One of the ways in which the paper is set up to resemble a magazine article is the use of its photographs and pictures. A second way in which the layout contributes to a magazine article resemblance is the use of double columns. Lastly, two other ways the design makes this look like a magazine article is repetition of the title on each page of the paper and having certain phrases from the paper enlarged and positioned throughout the paper.

(b)(b)  The appearance of this paper influences the way an audience reads it because certain styling techniques makes the reader think they are reading less than they are. The double column spaces the paper by not having its audience read the paper from left to right continuously. The addition of enlarged phrases and photographs also adds to the appearance that there is less to read because these two designs take up space in the paper. The enlarged phrases also have the effect of allowing the reader to get a preview of what is to come in the paper and provide an interest for appealing parts of the paper.

(c) (c)  If the images were removed from the paper and re-formatted to look more like a typical college paper, the paper would change by no longer looking like an article from a magazine and look more like a research paper. The paper would also probably not be appealing towards the younger Generaton Y audience it is intended for in its current format. The attention of younger audiences is captivated by images and less reading. The less they have to read to comprehend a concept, the more likely it will be that they read it.  

Spring Break Personal Post (Morasa S.)

Spring break had been much anticipated and it was nice to just have a week away from all of the pressures of classes and studying. Unlike most breaks, I wanted this break to simply be relaxing and spent at home. The first day back home, my mom had cooked a large home-cooked meal and my family and I spent the rest of the night watching movies. The rest of my break was spent relatively the same way. I enjoyed the company of my parents and my younger brother as we spent as day in New York City and the rest of the week simply shopping, watching movies, playing games, and of course, talking. Although my spring break didn’t consist of going to the beach like most people or riding on a cruise, it was spent just as I had anticipated. I got a chance to catch up on my sleep and spend time with the people I had missed most. It was a great way to be back home before going back in about two months. 

Tuesday, March 17, 2009

They Say, I Say "Don't Blame the Eater" (Morasa S.)

David Zinczenko's article on his opinion about children suing fast-food companies took me by surprise and completely changed my outlook on the much debated issue. I particularly enjoyed his introduction to his argument by taking the opposing side first and stating what the opposite argument would say to defend their case. His article was then built from the contrasting opinion which made it a very strong and persuasive piece. Another factor that took me by surprise was how easily I was persuaded to agree with Zinczenko's opinion on the matter. When I hear about this particular argument, I am usually very quick to say that people should take responsibility for what they eat. Nevertheless, I was able to see that some children do not always have the option to have meals prepared for them at home as well as the fast-food industries lack of informing consumers of calorie intake on it's products. The article was well-supported with factual evidence using statistics and easy to understand numbers. With these claims and factors, I particularly enjoyed this article and am very swayed in my opinion.